Jumat, 23 Mei 2014

Descriptive I



My Mother, My Everything

“Mom, you are my everything.”
Have you ever heard this quotation? Or have you ever felt it? Yap, I think you have same opinion with me. Mother is everything. She is one of many people who gives extraordinary influences for my life. She has been in my life since I was born and she will always be in my life, no matter what happens. She is so important for me. She is a beautiful woman who is full of love and always becomes my inspiration.
My mother is a beautiful woman. She has an oval face which makes her looks so attractive. She also has straight hair, big eyes, thin lips, and pointed nose. She looks so beautiful with her fair complexion. She has a nice body because she was a good dancer when she was young. She is so fashionable. Her style is simple, but looks so elegant. Everyone who meets her for the first time usually thinks that my mother is still in early 30’s. Now, she is 47 years old, but still looks so beautiful, fresh, and young.
My mother is full of love. It is hard to describe the feeling that a mother has for her children. She always gives great supports for me. If I do something wrong, my mother never gets angry. She just tells me that I am wrong and teaches me to do the right thing. She is the first person who teaches me to walk, speak, and wear make-up. She also the person who makes me realize that life is so beautiful when we love it. My mother also the only person that can always accompany me in every situation. She is the most faithful person who always listens my stories or my problems and gives the best solution for it. She also always understands me. She understands my ability, my behavior, and my habit. She teaches me how to change my bad behavior or habit to be better and better. She never leaves me alone to face this awful life.
My mother is my inspiration. She is good in cooking and doing all the house works. She is a teacher in junior high school. She always tells me that become a teacher is a honorable job. It is so happy to share our knowledge with others. She loves her students like she loves her children. Eventhough she is busy with her job, she still can spend her time for us, for her family. She is a great woman. She always smiles although she has a big problem. She always smiles eventhough she is sad. She is really a good mother who inspires me.
I am who I am because of my mother. She gives so many influences for my life. She is so attractive with her appearance, she is full of love, and she always inspires me to do great things in my life. I love my mother like I love my life. My mother is my everything.

5 komentar:

  1. Good job Widya!
    i really love your writing. You can describe your mother well in your descriptive text. You are right that mother is everything. Mother is someone who always there for her children.
    But, pay attention with the mechanic. When you use the conjunction like "but" to join two sentences in the middle of the sentence, i think that you should not put comma after the first sentence, like in the sentence of the second paragraph, "Her style is simple, but looks so elegant." It should be "Her style is simple but looks so elegant."
    Moreover, in the fourth paragraph, "a honorable job" should be an honorable job. You can check it in the oxford dictionary. Overall, your writing is very good.
    Keep working widya :)

    BalasHapus
  2. Thank you for the comment, Ita. It is so useful to help me improving my writing skill. :)
    Thank you so much :D

    BalasHapus
  3. your description text is great Widya. you clearly describe your mother.
    I do feel that mother is every things. mother is a person who was instrumental in our growth. She patiently educate her child to be true human.
    great job (y)

    BalasHapus
  4. Nice to read your writing Widya :D
    Your writing reminds me to my mother. You did a good writing to describe your mother.
    Good job Widyaaa

    BalasHapus
  5. you have described your mother clearly Widya. I can imagine your mother appearance and also her character from your explanation.I think you success to gain the purpose of descriptive text. I'm waiting for you next writing Widya,, :)

    BalasHapus