Jumat, 23 Mei 2014

Descriptive II



My Wonderful Friend

At first, I think this life is so boring. Everyday I have to get up in the morning, take a bath, go to school, do the homework, and many other things that become my routine activities. I do all of my activities well, but I can not enjoy it. I feel so tired after doing all of my activities and also I do not know what I will be in the future because I just do it and follow my parents’ wish. However, it is so different when I met her, one of my best friends when I was in senior high school. She makes me realize that life is not as flat as I think. She tells me that this world is so wonderful. She is my best friend. She is so attractive, smart, and always there for me in every situation.
My best friend is good looking. She has an oval face and round eyes which makes her looks so attractive. She is also so beautiful with her wavy hair, thin lips, pointed nose, and fair complexion. Her body is good because she is a great dancer. She is also so fashionable. She always knows the newest trend and modificates it to suit her taste. That is why, sometimes she becomes the trend center of style for us. She is so girly because she loves to wear make up and accessories like earrings, necklace, and bracelet. She looks so elegant with her style.
 My best friend is so smart. She always gets rank in her class. She always gets good scores in every examination. She is also so active. She joins many organization or club which can enrich her knowledge and experience. Sometimes, she is so busy with her activities in that organization or club, but she can still spend her time for studying. That is why she always brings books everywhere. She also likes to read novels. She always tells me that it is so important for us to balance our knowledge with our society, so that she always keeps studying eventhough she is so busy with her activities in her organization or club. She always says that of course we need to have good knowledge which can help us to reach our dreams in the future, but it is also so important to have good relation with others because we can not live alone. We definitely need others to help us facing this life.
My best friend always accompanies me in every situation. When I am sad because I broke up with my boyfriend or when I am happy because I get a good rank, she is always there for me. She really understands me. She always listens my stories or my problem and she gives the solution for it wisely. When I broke up with my boyfriend, she comes to me and helps me to “repair” my feeling or my heart. When I am hard to understand a lesson, she will come to my house and teaches me about that lesson patiently. When I feel so sad, she always comes to me and comforts me. She can bring my smile back with her jokes. She also always asks me to do “crazy” things to release my emotions, like singing loudly, going to the beach, screaming loudly, and also doing many others thing that I have never thought before.
My best friend gives an extraordinary influences for my life. Maybe some people think that this kind of friend only exist in my imagination. However, I emphasize that it is so wrong. I also do not predict if I can have a friend like her. She makes my life, especially when I was in senior high school, so colorful. She helps me to color my life. Many people have ever said that if you have “crazy” friend, it means that you have everything. Since I met her, my best friend, I really realize that it is so true. My best friend always inspires me. She is so attractive with her appearance, she is so smart with her knowledge and experience, and she is always beside me in every situation. She is really a wonderful friend.

4 komentar:

  1. Widya I like this story also and I also agree that have a crazy friend means that you have everything but I am a little bit confused with the sentence in the last paragraph,
    ' she makes my life, especially when I was in senior high school, so colorful.'
    probably this sentence can be changed become 'she makes my life so colorful, especially when I was in senior high school. '

    BalasHapus
  2. Okay Gita. Thank you for your comment. It is so useful for me because it helps me to realize that I have to improve the organization of my writing. :)
    Thank you so much, Gita :D

    BalasHapus
  3. you have good writing widya. i also have some kind of friends like that.
    i am little bit confuse with your second paragraph. your second paragraph is suppose to describe about your friend appearance right? but in your thesis statement you don't mention it. you just write "She is so attractive". may be you can write "she has attractive appearance" to make it clear.
    good writing widya :)

    BalasHapus
  4. Nice picture Widya.
    i'm agree with Gita and Dina. You have to write your thesis statement more detail and also pay attention with your grammar. Fighting Widya,,,

    BalasHapus